My blood hammers out your name

A maelstrom of green
On blue
On gold
Stars in your eyes
Oceanic,
My blood hammers out
Your name.

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17 Responses to My blood hammers out your name

  1. Jingle says:

    super apt words..
    profound
    and beautiful..

    Happy Rally.
    🙂

  2. mairmusic says:

    Swift, intense– nicely done!

  3. fiveloaf says:

    hammers is a great word to use in this instance- what a choice! what a choice! i love it! here’s mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/wedged/

  4. honeyhaiku says:

    Powerful brevity !

  5. bendedspoon says:

    wow! that name has power over you 🙂

  6. haggishead says:

    oh wow… I want someone to write such a beautiful poem for me 😦

  7. Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom says:

    beautiful! if you don’t shout it out, the earth itself will shout it for you! nicely done!

    Check Mine too: “Perfect”

  8. love the imagery… i just got back from the tropics and can totally feel this one

  9. cinnamon blues says:

    Evocative poem 🙂

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