A maelstrom of green
Stars in your eyes
My blood hammers out
super apt words..
Thank you Jingle. You too.
Swift, intense– nicely done!
Thank you. High praise…I think you are one of the great poets on here (:
quick and slick.. well written..!
Here’s My Poetry For The Rally
Everyone else here who has not already…read Vinay’s poem. It is excellent and uplifting.
hammers is a great word to use in this instance- what a choice! what a choice! i love it! here’s mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/wedged/
Fiveloaf’s is Awesome too. Check it out.
Powerful brevity !
wow! that name has power over you 🙂
Yes. She does (:
oh wow… I want someone to write such a beautiful poem for me 😦
Thanks for the kind words haggishead.
beautiful! if you don’t shout it out, the earth itself will shout it for you! nicely done!
Check Mine too: “Perfect”
love the imagery… i just got back from the tropics and can totally feel this one
Evocative poem 🙂
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