Here in this moonlight

Limitless potential
called forth
limited
given shape
and specificity
Brick on brick
limitless potential
given now
and only this once
existence
presence
solidity
shape

And here in this moonlight
you are beautiful to me

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10 Responses to Here in this moonlight

  1. fillingahole says:

    “And here in this moonlight
    you are beautiful to me”
    gorgeous and lush…

  2. Jingle says:

    lovely poem,
    Thanks for the treat.
    xxx

    Here is one of my entries, an award is attached, thanks for the support.

    http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-sister-lives-too-far-away/

  3. NotATameLion says:

    I submitted this poem to the Poetry Potluck at: http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

  4. tekia says:

    a wonderful piece. I like the peacefulness of it. bravo!

  5. Jessicas Japes says:

    I like the ending to this after the build up. very clever!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-fortress/

  6. Luke Prater says:

    Absolutely beautiful, actually. I enjoy not just your words but your word economy. Much empowering the essence of your piece. Those single-word lines really made this one for me

    Cheers

    Luke

    (mine are here –
    http://wp.me/pTeVg-cx
    http://wp.me/pTeVg-cP

  7. Tammy says:

    I agree with Jessica! Very clever.

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